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  • Essay

    • Many students choose to attend to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.
    • Why do some students study abroad?
  • Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
  • The issue at hand is why do some students study abroad?
  • This is an important issue, because a lot of students tend to study abroad for variety of reasons, like seeking for better knowledge, making new friends and discovering new cultures, and learning new languages as well.
  • And finally, getting better jobs.
  • First of all, the first reason that a lot of students who go studying abroad are looking for better education.
  • This is because many of the talent students don’t have the right tools, and instructors, so they study abroad looking for supports from their professors and their universities to continue their researches.
  • For example, students who study in advance colleges and universities, they get supports for their researches on their thesis, and get an internship to pursuit their researches.
  • Secondly, another reason that why students go study abroad is that they see it an opportunity for them to interact with new friends, and discover many different cultures, and beside of all of that learning new languages while being abroad.
  • Therefore, most of students see it like a challenge and new experience for them, which they have to go through it.
  • And declare to themselves and others that they can make it, and succeed in it.
  • Finally, students who want to go studying abroad are looking for better jobs.
  • A lot of them like to talk and discuss with international students, looking for gaining new skills, in order to be qualified in their jobs, especially communication skills, which become a vital skill for workers.
  • To conclude, a lot of students go study abroad for variety of reason.

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