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Văn bản từ vaness182 - English

  • End of the year.

    • I'm sick since the Christmas Eve, I felt ill from December 24th till yesterday, I had bronchitis.
    • On December 26th, my mommy took me to the hospital, My cousin works on the hospital, she is doctor.
    • When she looked myself, she interned me on the hospital.
    • I felt alone, but sometimes, as Kami my cousin and Xiomy my girlfriend went to visited me, they brought candies, bread, juices hid on their backpacks.
    • On Saturday, December 29th, I got out the hospital, like outpatients' department.
    • When came back home, I hug to Fifi my kitty, later, I called all my friends for cell phone, I ate "noche buena", it's a dessert, I like it.
    • The last night of the year, Karolette invited us for a party, I couldn't go, I said to Xiomy: "you must go and amuse you", she answer me: "I don't want go without you".
    • I felt sick still, then, I went to sleep at 23 o'clock, and she woke me at midnight.
    • Was beautiful, I woke up and saw her, then I like dance, she don't know but she likes learning, also, we saw the fireworks and we came back to sleep.
    • Yesterday was December 1st, and we made a barbecue. we like cook, and yesterday the weather was warm, and our fathers and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feet.
    • They couldn't walk with shoes on the grass.

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    • I felt alone, but sometimes, as Kami my cousin and Xiomy my girlfriend went to visited me, they brought candies, bread, juices hid on their backpacks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I felt alone, b. But sometimes, as Kami my cousin and Xiomy my girlfriend went to visited me, t. They brought me candies, bread, and juices which were hid oin their backpacks.
    • I felt alone, but somethough at times, as Kami, my cousin, and Xiomy, my girlfriend wentcame to visited me, and they brought candies, bread, and juices hid oden in their backpacks.
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    • When came back home, I hug to Fifi my kitty, later, I called all my friends for cell phone, I ate "noche buena", it's a dessert, I like it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I came back home, I hug toged Fifi my kitty,en and later, I called all my friends foron the cell phone,. I ate "noche buena", it's which is a dessert, that I like it.
    • When came backI went home, I hug toged Fifi my kitty,cat, and later, I called all of my friends foron my cell phone,. And I ate "noche buena", it' which is a dessert, I like it.
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    • The last night of the year, Karolette invited us for a party, I couldn't go, I said to Xiomy: "you must go and amuse you", she answer me: "I don't want go without you".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The last night of the year, Karolette invited us for a party,. I couldn't go,. I said to Xiomy: "yYou must go and amuse you",rself". But she answered me: "I don't want to go without you".
    • The last night of the yearOn New Year's Eve, Karolette invited us forto a party, I couldn't go, so I said to Xiomy: "you must go and amuse you", she answerhave fun," and she said to me: "I don't want go without you"."
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    • Was beautiful, I woke up and saw her, then I like dance, she don't know but she likes learning, also, we saw the fireworks and we came back to sleep.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • WIt was beautiful, I woke up and saw her, then. I like dance, but she don'es not know buthat she likes to learning, also, w. We saw the fireworks, and we camethen we went back to sleep.
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    • Yesterday was December 1st, and we made a barbecue. we like cook, and yesterday the weather was warm, and our fathers and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Yesterday was December 1st, and we made a barbecue. we like cook, and yesterday the weather was warm. We had a barbecue, and our father's and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feet.our house.
    • Yesterday was DecemberJanuary 1st, and we mhade a barbecue. we like We enjoy cooking, and yesterday the weather was warm, and our fathers and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feetour home.
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