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  • Globalization

    • In our age of great human progress the role of globalization is increasing.
    • That is why we need to know everything about this process: its advantages and disadvantages.
    • On the one hand globalization is good because of governments’ cooperation in solving such problems, which couldn’t be solved by only one country.
    • Also increases the knowledge exchange, the experience exchange, free labor and capital motion.
    • As a result competition between the companies increases in the global market.
    • So the goods are not overpriced, that is why every customer can buy more and satisfy his material and cultural needs.
    • It is very nice, but on the other hand we have serious disadvantages.
    • Economics of countries become interdependent and problems in on country provoke problems in the other countries.
    • And it is more difficult to overcome global crisis than to manage it in one country.
    • Also globalization with its free flows of labor and capital can aggravate the internal problems such as unemployment.
    • The second point is that it is harder to manage the country and its economy because there are more influencing factors then earlier.
    • The third point that transnational corporation activity increases and sometimes corporations can dictate governments.
    • And it is difficult to make corporations to be honest and not to breach the rules.
    • In conclusion I’d like to add that globalization process is unavoidable and that globalization effects are different for countries of different development.

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    • On the one hand globalization is good because of governments’ cooperation in solving such problems, which couldn’t be solved by only one country.
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    • On the one hand, globalization is good because of governments’ cooperation in solving such problems, which couldn’t be solved by only one country.
    • On the one hand, globalization is good because of governments’ cooperation in solving such problems, which couldn’t be solved by onlany one country by itself.
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    • So the goods are not overpriced, that is why every customer can buy more and satisfy his material and cultural needs.
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    • So the goods are not overpriced, that is why everyThis can lead to more competition, which allows goods to become more affordable, increasing the spending power of each customer can buy more andd thus allowing them to satisfy histheir material and cultural needs.
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    • The second point is that it is harder to manage the country and its economy because there are more influencing factors then earlier.
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    • The second point is that it is hardermay prove more difficult to manage the country and its economy because with globalization, there are more influencing external factors thean earlierthere would otherwise be.
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    • The third point that transnational corporation activity increases and sometimes corporations can dictate governments.
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    • The third point is that transnational corporatione activity increases and sometimes corporations can dictatat times influence governments.
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    • And it is difficult to make corporations to be honest and not to breach the rules.
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    • And it is difficult to make corporations to be honest and not to breach the rulesFurthermore, it might then be increasingly difficult for a government to make corporations operate lawfully when the government is susceptible to being influenced by these powerful corporation.
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    • In conclusion I’d like to add that globalization process is unavoidable and that globalization effects are different for countries of different development.
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    • In conclusion, I’d like to add that the globalization process is unavoidable and that the effects of globalization effects are different for countries ofin different stages of development. ¶
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