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  • Advertising

  • Advertising has become part and parcel of our every day life.
  • Advertisements are all around us, not just on TV, radio and in the press, but also at sports grounds, in shop windows, and on posters, carrier bags, badges, T-shirts, trams and buses and even hot air balloons.
  • Whether we like it or not, advertising is a powerful force, and all countries have different ways of persuading people to buy something.
  • advertising often uses the language and pictures to make us believe that we should be ashamed of ourselves for not buying a certain product for our families or ourselves.
  • Advertising shows us happy families that have just bought a new TV or a car, it does not matter.
  • And subconsciously we dream to buy the same thing.
  • And it is not so important, is this thing good or not, whether it is necessary to us.The main thing that we want to experience the same emotions, the same pride.
  • And it is just ridiculous that we often do not even remember the product that we want to buy, only commercial.
  • And, coming to the store, frantically remember what shampoo was in any advertising or film.
  • Any person is suggestible.
  • We see on the screen, beautiful and successful people who are using these or other perfume, eat special yogurt and drink a special juice.
  • And buying something at the store, we remember it's advertising, thinking maybe we will feel like people from advertising.
  • This is most clearly seen in children.
  • Children are a good example, because they usually want a special kind of chocolate or a toy or chewing gum.
  • Being naive they can not objectively assess what is true and what is false, and choose a really good products.
  • But with eyes full of tears they are asking more expensive, but advertised goods.
  • I think that advertising motivates us to buy goods that we do not need.
  • I think that advertising motivates us to buy goods that we do not need.
  • But it is principle of human mind work.Each of us wants a beautiful life, but advertising should inform us about the possibilities, not to convince that we are miserable because we can not buy something.

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    • Advertisements are all around us, not just on TV, radio and in the press, but also at sports grounds, in shop windows, and on posters, carrier bags, badges, T-shirts, trams and buses and even hot air balloons.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Whether we like it or not, advertising is a powerful force, and all countries have different ways of persuading people to buy something.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • advertising often uses the language and pictures to make us believe that we should be ashamed of ourselves for not buying a certain product for our families or ourselves.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • And it is not so important, is this thing good or not, whether it is necessary to us.The main thing that we want to experience the same emotions, the same pride.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • And it is just ridiculous that we often do not even remember the product that we want to buy, only commercial.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • We see on the screen, beautiful and successful people who are using these or other perfume, eat special yogurt and drink a special juice.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • And buying something at the store, we remember it's advertising, thinking maybe we will feel like people from advertising.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • Children are a good example, because they usually want a special kind of chocolate or a toy or chewing gum.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • Being naive they can not objectively assess what is true and what is false, and choose a really good products.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
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    • But it is principle of human mind work.Each of us wants a beautiful life, but advertising should inform us about the possibilities, not to convince that we are miserable because we can not buy something.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19