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Dear Experiment e.V.-team, In my veins is Tatar's blood- a folk of nomads.

With the strong connection to my family in Kazakstan I learned russian.

Furthermore I can speak English, French and Spanish and of course German, what means that I can talk to 2.8 billion people from all over the world.

I'm very communicative and since I can remember, it was my biggest desire to travel around the world.

I want to find out sth about the world, the people in it and me.

'The world is a capricious inamorata, who wants to get conquered.' says one of my favourite authors.

I really want to learn to speak perfect Spanish and to experience new possibilities to grow by having contact with other cultures and other people- especially before I'll go to university.

I'm highly motivated to integrate myself as far as possible and to become a precious part of the local society.

I think I will fit best into the project options because it is my biggest desire to be a part of something bigger, something more important and something, where I can give back a lot to people!

I know that we live in good conditions and I'm absolutely grateful for this.

I am eager for knowledge and a team-player.

I am absolutely tollerant, open-minded for everything new, creative, spontaneous, flexible and able to work under pressure.

Furthermore I would describe me as an empathetic person, who is very respectful and with a big sense of humour.

I'm very interested in things, that connect people like for instance Polyglotclub or Postcrossing.

I can contribute an highly distinctive motivation to help people and the will to fit in a particular role.

Especially your organization equates immensly to my ideals, why It would be a big pleasure and honor to me, if I supported you!

Just like you, I strongly believe in mutual understanding, esteem and broad-mindedness.

Pls critizise me!What is missing?