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  • The first day for the new coming year 2013

    • a new year comes taking my good mood for the new coming life.at the end of the past year i made a wish with my best friends to have a walk to Tibet in the middle of 2013, so since today i will prepare for it, and i walked 5,000 m today in 50 mins. i will keep on to the day to Tibet.

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    • a new year comes taking my good mood for the new coming life.at the end of the past year i made a wish with my best friends to have a walk to Tibet in the middle of 2013, so since today i will prepare for it, and i walked 5,000 m today in 50 mins. i will keep on to the day to Tibet.
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    • aA new year comes tak, bringing mye a good mood for the new coming life.a At the end of the past year iI made a wish with my best friends to have a walk to Tibet in the middle of 2013, so sincefrom today forward i will prepare for it, and i walked 5,000 m today in 50 mins. iI will keep on toit up for theat day of walking to Tibet.
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