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The story.
- Of course, a man was a wild, too.
- Even he had not tried to improve himself, until met a woman.
She said to his,what at all she don't like a such wild life.
- She found a dry cave, where they can settle themselves.

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- The story.
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Ayat 1
- Of course, a man was a wild, too.
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- Of course, ~~a man~~he was a wild, too.
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Ayat 2
- Even he had not tried to improve himself, until met a woman.
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- ~~Even h~~He had not even tried to improve himself, until met a woman.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- She said to his,what at all she don't like a such wild life.
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Ayat 4
- She found a dry cave, where they can settle themselves.
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- She found a dry cave, where they canould settle themselves.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4