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  • My Mother

  • My mother's name is Yen.
    • This year, she 49 years old.
  • Co.op.mart is place where she is working as a saleclerk.
  • I really really love her.
    • She is the loveist woman I have ever known.
    • A woman devotes all her life to her family without hesitance.
    • But that is not the only thing make me love her.
    • " Always be optimistic, confident in this life and give all her love for me.", which is the thing make me or anyone like me have never made her sad or disappointed.
    • As a mother, she teachs me how to become a true man.
    • I still remember, when i were young, I were a selfish, Stubborn child and I usually answer my mother back.
  • I think I used to be a bad daughter!
    • Because I always wrest everything that I wanna have, if I don't have it, I will cry loudly as much as I can or I will be angry, then go away.
  • At that time, my mother was so calm and wise.
  • She didn't use birch or anything like that.
  • But instead of that, all the toys of mine were disappeared suddenly without trace.
  • That was also the time when I realized that was the way my mother want to tell me: " I would have nohing when I claimed unreasonably many things and tried to seize the things that were not belong to me." When I had a bad mark or lose in a competition.
  • All I received is a tender smile in her face.
    • Because she usually told me: " Anyone has mistakes in their life, the important thing was not how many mistakes you have, that is how you do to make those mistakes did not repeat anymore." or " The loser wasthe person who has never tried to acchieve."

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