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  • Hello! Help me, please :)

  • Hello!
  • My name is Julia.
  • I'm 15 years old.
    • Today I wrote here that you could correct me.
    • So, I will start.
    • Lately, I has moved in Chicago.
    • 15 years I lived in Ukraine and now I think this very strangely, be in the place where you don't understand nothing.
    • But I really think, that all don't so bad.
    • I live in USA and I always wanted this !:) Now I seeking a pen friend, who can correct and just talk with me.
    • I think, this not necessarily a friend, who will write me a paper letters.
    • No, I want a pen friend in Internet who can be online and who letter I don't must wait month by month...
    • So, now I will tell you about me.
  • I really like drawing and reading different books.
    • I can draw some lyrics arts, posters, but I can't to draw some pictures and I don't like do this.
    • What about books - I like different kind of books - a novels, biography, fantastic, romantic and other genres of books. Almost forgot!
    • I like listen music very much.
    • How kind or genre of music I love?
    • I love some rock anD some rap music, for example: Placebo, Nirvana, Nicki Minaj and Tyga.
  • But if honestly, I'm really music lover.
  • Anyway, this is I. So, that's it.
  • Anyway, correct me, please.

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