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  • Friendship and love

    • Both love and friendship are special and natural feelings of human.
    • All of them are derived from sincere hearts.
  • Someone said that: "Friendship is a kind of love without wings".
  • Everyone always wants to have longing friendship and a real love.
  • But it's really hard.
    • It takes time, patience.
  • Remember: If you want others treat you well, you must treat them better first.
    • Maybe even you must improve your behaviour much better to succeed in finding longing friendship or a real love.
    • Friendship can easily lead to love, even a real love for the whole life.
  • But what about friendship following a love?
    • A boy and a girl, after they had happy time with each other in love, for some reason, they can't keep that kind of relationship longing any more then they broke up.
  • So after that, should they be friends or not?
  • In my opinion, they should be still friends.
    • Nothing to be afraid!
    • Just because I'll be hurter when I've lost a real friend than when I've lost the person whom I've ever loved.

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