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    • Hi, i'm allyson bernard i have 15 years old, i have two sisters and one brother, my first sister is Chrtistina she's 20years old, my second sister is Stella and this is her birthday today! she's 13 years old, and my brother is Sacha he's 11 years old.
  • My parents are divorced.
    • I live in Belgium, my parents come from Spain.
    • I want to learn English beacause i really love this language! my dream? live in New york or Los Angeles! .
    • I love dance! this is my hobby, and i like too play video game, so, goodbye friends! :D

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    • Hi, i'm allyson bernard i have 15 years old, i have two sisters and one brother, my first sister is Chrtistina she's 20years old, my second sister is Stella and this is her birthday today! she's 13 years old, and my brother is Sacha he's 11 years old.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Hi, i'm aMy name is Allyson bBernard i haveand I am 15 years old, i. I have two sisters and one brother, m. My first sister is Chrtistina, she's 20 years old, and my second sister is Stella, and this iit's her birthday today! sShe's 13 years old, and m. My brother's name is Sacha and he's 11 years old.
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    • Hi, i'm aMy name is Allyson bBernard i have. I am 15 years old, i. I have two sisters and one brother, my first. My older sister is Chrtistina she'. She is 20 years old, my second. My younger sister is Stella, and thisoday is her birthday today! sShe's 13 years old, and my just turns 13. Finally, my younger brother is Sacha he'. He is 11 years old.
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    • I want to learn English beacause i really love this language! my dream? live in New york or Los Angeles! .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I want to learn English beacause iI really love this language! It is my dream? to live in New yYork or Los Angeles! .
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