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- Recently, I watched series called "I hear your voice"; it is a Korean series.
I consider this series as one of the most beautiful series that I watched.
The beauty of this series came from its story, story timeline, sound effects and actors.
By the end of this story, it shows that if someone get revenge, he/she will become criminal and on one remember the crime that who revenge for.

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- Recently, I watched series called "I hear your voice"; it is a Korean series.
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- Recently, I watched serie it's called "I hear your voice"; it is a Korean series.
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- I consider this series as one of the most beautiful series that I watched.
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- The beauty of this series came from its story, story timeline, sound effects and actors.
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- By the end of this story, it shows that if someone get revenge, he/she will become criminal and on one remember the crime that who revenge for.
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