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  • Sexy bartender

    • From sexy photos posted online to electoral posters: it could be this the Laura Maggi’s goal, famous because she is the sexy bartender of Brescia so far and is ready to enter in the politic field now, the Partito Protezione Animali (Animal Care Party).
    • Mrs Maggi has made her local of Brescia so famous, thanks to her provocative dresses behind the bar and to sexy photos, that she is ready to open another one.
    • Now, she is presenting herself in front of cameras with a more chaste white shirt and a puppy on her arms, to explain her vocation for the public commitment.
    • She said to ANSA in a video interview, “I have neither politic models, nor historic ones, nor actual ones.
    • And because of that, I’ve chosen a new party, which is not part of the Right, neither of the Left nor of the Centre.” Her activity in the party is addressed to young people, making them aware of the animal cause, but it is not excluded a candidature for some politic role.

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  • Satz 1
    • From sexy photos posted online to electoral posters: it could be this the Laura Maggi’s goal, famous because she is the sexy bartender of Brescia so far and is ready to enter in the politic field now, the Partito Protezione Animali (Animal Care Party).
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    • FromBased on the sexy photos posted online toand electoral posters:, it could be this theat Laura Maggi’s goal, --famous because she is the sexy bartender of Brescia so far and is ready to--is enter ing the political field now,as a member of the Partito Protezione Animali (Animal Care Party).
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1
  • Satz 2
    • Mrs Maggi has made her local of Brescia so famous, thanks to her provocative dresses behind the bar and to sexy photos, that she is ready to open another one.
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    • Mrs. Maggi has made her localcity of Brescia so famous, thanks to her provocative dressesattire behind the bar and to sexy photos, that she is ready to [?open another one?].
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
  • Satz 3
    • Now, she is presenting herself in front of cameras with a more chaste white shirt and a puppy on her arms, to explain her vocation for the public commitment.
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    • Now, she is presenting herself in front of cameras with a more chaste white shirt and a puppy oin her arms, to explain her vocation for the public commitmentinterest in public service.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3
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  • Satz 5
    • And because of that, I’ve chosen a new party, which is not part of the Right, neither of the Left nor of the Centre.” Her activity in the party is addressed to young people, making them aware of the animal cause, but it is not excluded a candidature for some politic role.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • And because of that, I’ve chosen a new party, which is not part of the Right, neither of the Left nor of, or the Centre.”¶Her activity in the party is addressed to young people, making them aware of the animal cause, but it iissues affecting animals, but she has not excluded a candidaturecy for some politic rolal office. ¶
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5