Korrigjime

NDIHMO NË KORIGJIM TANI!korrigjuar

Tekst nga MohamedRizk4sci - English

Versioni Origjinal
Versioni i Korrigjuar

- The Danger of Electromagnetic Pulse
- I watched series called Revolution.
- This series tell that all the electric equipment are not work suddenly.
- The city changes to desert.
- All airplanes and ships are stop working.
- Things that still working are steam engine that not use electricity like stream trains.
- This fiction can happen in real world by powerful electromagnetic pulse that can produced natural such as electromagnetic pulse produced by sun storms or artificial by electromagnetic bomb.

MohamedRizk4sciSeptember 2013Votoni tani!
- Report as spam?

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English

Title
- The Danger of Electromagnetic Pulse
  Votoni tani!
- The Danger of Electromagnetic Pulses
  Lestrange Komente 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Title
Fjalia 1
- I watched series called Revolution.
  Votoni tani!
- I watched a series called Revolution.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 1
Fjalia 2
- This series tell that all the electric equipment are not work suddenly.
  Votoni tani!
- This series tells that all the electrical equipment ~~are not~~stops working suddenly.
  Lestrange Komente 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  0% GOOD (1 votes)
- This series ~~tell that~~depicted how all of the electrical equipment ~~are not work suddenly~~s will suddenly stop working.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- This series ~~tell that all the~~depicted what would happen if all electrical equipment ~~are not work suddenly~~suddenly stopped working.
  xdt Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 2
Fjalia 3
- The city changes to desert.
  Votoni tani!
- ThHence cit~~y changes to~~ies will become deserts.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3
Fjalia 4
- All airplanes and ships are stop working.
  Votoni tani!
- All the airplanes and ships ~~are~~will stop working.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- All airplanes and ships ~~are~~ stop working.
  Lestrange Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 4
Fjalia 5
- Things that still working are steam engine that not use electricity like stream trains.
  Votoni tani!
- Things that still work~~ing~~ are steam engines that do not use electricity, like stream trains.
  Lestrange Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- Th~~ing~~e only equipments/devices that stwill continue to work~~ing~~ are ~~steam engin~~those that do not ~~use~~depend on electricity ~~like~~. Equipments such as stream engine trains.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 5
Fjalia 6
- This fiction can happen in real world by powerful electromagnetic pulse that can produced natural such as electromagnetic pulse produced by sun storms or artificial by electromagnetic bomb.
  Votoni tani!
- This work of fiction c~~an happen in real world by powerful electromagnetic pulse that can produced natural such as~~ould potentially become a reality, due to the powerful electromagnetic pulse produced by the sun's storms or by artificial by electromagnetic bomb.s.
  RicardoValentino Komente
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Votoni tani!
- This ~~fiction can~~could happen in the real world by a powerful electromagnetic pulse that can produced naturally, such as an electromagnetic pulse produced by sunolar storms or artificially by electromagnetic bombs.
  Lestrange Komente 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  0% GOOD (1 votes)
- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 6

Korrigjime

Tekst nga MohamedRizk4sci - English

The Danger of Electromagnetic Pulse

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English

Members

GjuhËt

Ngjarjet/Ndodhitë