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  • Should Children Spend Much Time On Sports?

  • Should children spend much time on sports?
  • This is a good question.
  • Some people think that it’s not necessary for children to spend much time on sports, as other activities.
  • However, I disagree with that.
  • From my point of view, children should spend much time on sports, because it’s very important for them, especially at that age.
  • This is because sports contribute to the children development, like developing their bodies and protecting them from lots of diseases by improving their immunities.
  • It helps their bones to grow naturally, in the meanwhile getting rigid.
  • Even if they catch up flu, it will not hurt them as it does with others who do less sport, and they will be able to recover better than the others.
  • Another reason I’m with children should spend much more time on sports is because it increases the child’s cognitive development.
  • This is so important because we find lots of children who have a lack of understanding and analyzing.
  • For example, we usually find those who do sports are so active in their classes.
  • Because sports can help children to release the charges from their mind, as it refreshes them.
  • Thus it’ll be an advantage for them than the others.
  • Finally, research found that doing sports prevent children from obesity.
  • As it helps their insulin and their blood pressure, and regulate the sugar in their blood.
  • Moreover, by doing sports children are rarely exposing to have a heart attack when they grow up, because of sports improve their hearts as well as its beats.
  • Thus, they will live a long and robust life.
  • To conclude, as it said there is nothing compare to live a health life.
  • Sports are vital for our children and their development, yet parents should help and support their children, by helping them to join certain clubs.

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