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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada sinireri - English

  • Waste of time

    • When we first met she seemed so funy and cheerful.
    • She was making jokes and enjoyed the life.
    • She was the kind of person make you love the life so it' s irresistable to be with her.Eventually we began dating even though we barely know each other, but further period of our relationship I found out that she' s completely different person than I tought.
    • Such people as I prefer not to talk let alone having relationship.
    • She turned into someone who make a big deal about even a petty subject and tried to empose things on me saying, "you should stay away from that girl otherwise you will bear consequences", or she was making some weird stories up and expecting logical answers such as "Supposing you were a king of a far distant country, would you find and propose me" etc. etc. .
    • We are not together anymore, we broke up at the end of three weeks.
    • I tried to get rid of everything she gave me during our relationship because they remind me of her and I pity my lost days.
    • It was waste of time.
    • (This story is not real, I just wanted to use some basic words and pattern and it led me to this story.)

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • She was the kind of person make you love the life so it' s irresistable to be with her.Eventually we began dating even though we barely know each other, but further period of our relationship I found out that she' s completely different person than I tought.
      Undi sekarang!
    • She was the kind of person that could make you love the life so it' s irresistable to belife; it was hard to resist being with her. Eventually we began dating, even though we barely knoew each other, but further period of. However, later in our relationship I found outlearned that she' was completely different person than I thad thought.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • She turned into someone who make a big deal about even a petty subject and tried to empose things on me saying, "you should stay away from that girl otherwise you will bear consequences", or she was making some weird stories up and expecting logical answers such as "Supposing you were a king of a far distant country, would you find and propose me" etc. etc. .
      Undi sekarang!
    • She turned into someone who makde a big deal about even ary petty subject and triedthing. She would even try to eimpose things on me, saying that, "yYou should stay away from that girl - otherwise you wi'll bear the consequences", or¶she was making some weird stories up and." She might even make up a weird story, while still expecting a logical answers such as. Once she asked, "Supposinge you were a king ofin a far-off, distant country, w. Would you find and propose to me?" etc. etc. These types of things would happen over and over again.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • I tried to get rid of everything she gave me during our relationship because they remind me of her and I pity my lost days.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I've tried to get rid of everything she gave me during our relationship because they. It all reminds me of her, and I pity my lost daysregret the time I wasted.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • (This story is not real, I just wanted to use some basic words and pattern and it led me to this story.)
      Undi sekarang!
    • (This story is not real, I just wanted to use some basic words and pattern and it led me to this story.)¶¶Good story! I changed everything into the grammar/style/vocabulary I would've used.
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    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9