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  • What do you think about the social network ?

    • This is a vast topic, i must explain serveral things to do understand my thinking.
    • First , does Social network is an achievement ?
    • Yes, absolutly so i can’t say that is a bad things.
  • But there are different points of view, it’s a fact the social networks are permitted that people can communicate better than before, can have access about information quickly.
    • I could write a lot of good points about that, and all people know that.
  • Nevertheless all the things aren’t good, i’m thinking about the sad news, for example the childrens who have a lot of problems on the network, sometimes they can give themselves the death… Because when a publication is written on the web all people can be informing about that, and the news go quickly !
    • Some lifes have been broken because of stories of childrens.
  • Some people show their sexual life, or personal informations.
  • Currently, people can do and say all that they want, but in my opinion it’s too much, i want that all people can say all that they want but our identity must be able to control… In short the social network is a very good evolution but it must have a lot of control.

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