Poruka od DavidinParis - English
What do you think about the social network ?
- This is a vast topic, i must explain serveral things to do understand my thinking.
- First , does Social network is an achievement ?
- Yes, absolutly so i can’t say that is a bad things.
- But there are different points of view, it’s a fact the social networks are permitted that people can communicate better than before, can have access about information quickly.
- I could write a lot of good points about that, and all people know that.
- Nevertheless all the things aren’t good, i’m thinking about the sad news, for example the childrens who have a lot of problems on the network, sometimes they can give themselves the death… Because when a publication is written on the web all people can be informing about that, and the news go quickly !
- Some lifes have been broken because of stories of childrens.
- Some people show their sexual life, or personal informations.
- Currently, people can do and say all that they want, but in my opinion it’s too much, i want that all people can say all that they want but our identity must be able to control… In short the social network is a very good evolution but it must have a lot of control.
- DavidinParisSeptember 2013Glasajte sada!
PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English