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  • Going Back

  • When I came to Japan, around one year ago, I knew that one year wouldn't be long enough to realize that I'm actually here.
  • In matter of fact it still feels like I just arrived a few days ago.
  • Time is a -sorry can't use that word here- on one hand it feels like ages ago, when I thought: "Already half a year went by, (just) another six to go.", but on the other hand it feels like I just took a glimpse and now I'm here.
  • I left my dorm the other day and now I"m staying at my friends place, it's a kinda strange, I just can't put it in words.
    • 17 days and my dream will be over and I'll will have as much to miss as to remember.
    • It is hard to understand that I have to go back, mainly because I do not going home, leaving some place but leaving a new home to get back to the home I came from.
  • As hard as it is, in the end I can say that I'm not Japanese or Polish nor even German, I am a "sekai-jin", a person of this earth, priviliged to say that there are many places I can call home!

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • When I came to Japan, around one year ago, I knew that one year wouldn't be long enough to realize that I'm actually here.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Time is a -sorry can't use that word here- on one hand it feels like ages ago, when I thought: "Already half a year went by, (just) another six to go.", but on the other hand it feels like I just took a glimpse and now I'm here.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • I left my dorm the other day and now I"m staying at my friends place, it's a kinda strange, I just can't put it in words.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • It is hard to understand that I have to go back, mainly because I do not going home, leaving some place but leaving a new home to get back to the home I came from.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is hard to understand that I have to go back, mainly because I do'm not going home, leaving "some" place but leaving a new home to get back to the home I came from.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • As hard as it is, in the end I can say that I'm not Japanese or Polish nor even German, I am a "sekai-jin", a person of this earth, priviliged to say that there are many places I can call home!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7