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There and back again
Once upon a time a young man went to a confectionary store with the good intention of buying some tasty products of there.
Then, looking around the shop he realized that all sellers were girls and none of them paid any attention to him.
So, after fifteen minutes of desperate effort, he left the shop.
Not to be mentioned this shop was the most famous one in his city and he was the first customer of the day.
^__^ What our young fellow learned that day was, not all girls are worthy of respect and honor.

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- There and back again
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câu 1
- Once upon a time a young man went to a confectionary store with the good intention of buying some tasty products of there.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- Then, looking around the shop he realized that all sellers were girls and none of them paid any attention to him.
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câu 3
- So, after fifteen minutes of desperate effort, he left the shop.
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câu 4
- Not to be mentioned this shop was the most famous one in his city and he was the first customer of the day.
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câu 5
- ^__^ What our young fellow learned that day was, not all girls are worthy of respect and honor.
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