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Văn bản từ Apres-midi - English

  • There’s lavender and rose petals and the water sounds

    • It was swaggeringly hard winter.
    • I clearly remember long severe nights when I was sleepless.
    • I connected it with a fool moon because as expected from a person who was born with a surname, which has irrefutable resemblance with a word “wolf”, I’ve never fell asleep at least once a month.
    • I’ve never been able to explain it but somehow things is panning out based on this family heritage and symbolism at the same time.
    • I wrap my head around whether there is any anesthesia for this type of insomnia, and what it’s better to do at those sleepless nights.
    • I had already knew that the more I try to fall asleep the more I think.
    • The whirlpool of thoughts just poised to pop up when I close my eyes.
    • Finally, through ages I forced myself to embrace it and stop resisting because it makes me more somber and sluggish the following day.
    • Instead of fighting it, I’ve hanging in there and let those endless thoughts travel through my consciousness while I’m siting and looking through the window on a deserted playground.
    • I imagined that pitch darkness revealing sharp bold brunches, which pierce the night sky, is not cruel and trees are not lifeless.
  • After intense peering, I actually could spot green leaves.
    • Summertime and green landscapes pop up in my memory immediately, I could hear kids exclamations of enthusiasm of a game they are playing dog’s barking.
  • Without noticing it I fell asleep and my dream continues.

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    • I connected it with a fool moon because as expected from a person who was born with a surname, which has irrefutable resemblance with a word “wolf”, I’ve never fell asleep at least once a month.
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    • I connected it with a fooull moon because it was as expected from a person who was born with a surname, which has an irrefutable resemblance with athe word “wolf”, I’ve never feallen asleep at least once anight each month.
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    • I’ve never been able to explain it but somehow things is panning out based on this family heritage and symbolism at the same time.
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • I’ve never been able to explain it but somehow things isare panning out based on this family heritage and symbolism at the same time.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I wrap my head around whether there is any anesthesia for this type of insomnia, and what it’s better to do at those sleepless nights.
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • I'm trying to wrap my head around whether there is any anesthesia for this type of insomnia, and what it’'s better to do atduring those sleepless nights.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • Finally, through ages I forced myself to embrace it and stop resisting because it makes me more somber and sluggish the following day.
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    • Finally, through the ages I've forced myself to embrace it and stop resisting because it makes me more somber and sluggish the following day.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Instead of fighting it, I’ve hanging in there and let those endless thoughts travel through my consciousness while I’m siting and looking through the window on a deserted playground.
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    • Instead of fighting it, I’ve been hanging in there and letting those endless thoughts travel through my consciousness while I’m siting and looking through the window upon a deserted playground.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • I imagined that pitch darkness revealing sharp bold brunches, which pierce the night sky, is not cruel and trees are not lifeless.
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • I imagined that the pitch-black darkness, which revealings sharp bold bruanches, which pierce the night sky, is not so cruel and the trees are not lifeless.
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    • Summertime and green landscapes pop up in my memory immediately, I could hear kids exclamations of enthusiasm of a game they are playing dog’s barking.
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    • Summertime and green landscapes pop up in my memory immediately,. I could hear kidsthe enthusiastic exclamations of enthusiasm ofkids during a game they are playing dog’swhile dogs are barking.
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