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Text from LisaGlz - English

  • Cover letter for an internship

  • Object : Application for an internship Dear hiring manager, I am writing this letter to you with the intention of showing you my interest for an internship in Loulé’s tourist information center.
  • After graduating with a bachelor in foreign languages applied to business (Licence LEA) with majors in English and Korean, I decided to deepen my language and business knowledge with a master’s degree in international business and administration communication.
  • My diploma in foreign languages gave me the opportunity to discover more about different cultures and history, which quickly became a new hobby for me.
  • During my bachelor’s degree, I had the chance to travel to Korea for a year, which helped me understand how interesting tourism could be.
  • I was born and raised in France, but Portugal is the land my mother was born in, so I decided to acquire the Portuguese nationality as well as my French nationality.
  • I come to Portugal often for the summer break and always have the greatest time there.
  • For this reason, I would like to help tourists to have the same wonderful experience in the Algarve as I do everytime I come.
  • Having the opportunity to work in your establishment as an intern for 3 weeks would help me to get a first experience in the tourism sector and complete this goal to help other people during their trip in Portugal.
  • Despite being deeply connected to Portugal and raised in its culture, I unfortunately never had the opportunity to properly learn the language.
  • However, I mastered the English language during my bachelor’s degree and I always saw a lot of french tourists every time I came to Portugal.
  • Therefore, I think I could be of great help during the summer time.
  • Furthermore, staying at my family’s house in Almancil, I have a good knowledge of the area of Loulé, and wouldn’t have too much trouble guiding people around it.
  • I also worked several part-time jobs in France that allowed me to develop great customer contact and care skills that could also be helpful.
  • I am extremely motivated and serious when it comes to an opportunity to learn.
  • Giving me a chance to discover the world of tourism in a country that I deeply love and care about would be of precious help for me in the continuation of my studies.
  • Please find attached a copy of my resume, which provides more details about my qualifications and past experiences.
  • I remain at your disposal for further information or an interview. Best regards,

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • Object : Application for an internship Dear hiring manager, I am writing this letter to you with the intention of showing you my interest for an internship in Loulé’s tourist information center.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • After graduating with a bachelor in foreign languages applied to business (Licence LEA) with majors in English and Korean, I decided to deepen my language and business knowledge with a master’s degree in international business and administration communication.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • My diploma in foreign languages gave me the opportunity to discover more about different cultures and history, which quickly became a new hobby for me.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • During my bachelor’s degree, I had the chance to travel to Korea for a year, which helped me understand how interesting tourism could be.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • I was born and raised in France, but Portugal is the land my mother was born in, so I decided to acquire the Portuguese nationality as well as my French nationality.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • For this reason, I would like to help tourists to have the same wonderful experience in the Algarve as I do everytime I come.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Having the opportunity to work in your establishment as an intern for 3 weeks would help me to get a first experience in the tourism sector and complete this goal to help other people during their trip in Portugal.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Despite being deeply connected to Portugal and raised in its culture, I unfortunately never had the opportunity to properly learn the language.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • However, I mastered the English language during my bachelor’s degree and I always saw a lot of french tourists every time I came to Portugal.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • Furthermore, staying at my family’s house in Almancil, I have a good knowledge of the area of Loulé, and wouldn’t have too much trouble guiding people around it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • I also worked several part-time jobs in France that allowed me to develop great customer contact and care skills that could also be helpful.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • Giving me a chance to discover the world of tourism in a country that I deeply love and care about would be of precious help for me in the continuation of my studies.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • Please find attached a copy of my resume, which provides more details about my qualifications and past experiences.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17