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Apres-midi'den mesaj - English

  • The Sequoia Alley

    • When I feel weary after long study day, which is often full of tedious activities, which imply continuous fight tooth and nail for grades and justice, I want to alienate from the city life and take a deep breath around nature.
    • As far as I can remember myself, I’ve always been a villager trough and trough even though I live in a megalopolis my whole conscious life.
  • I guess the thirst for a quiet life was inherited from my dad.
    • When I seek rest and relief, I close my eyes and daydream about my early childhood years, which I spend with my family in the countryside next to the sequoia forest.
    • Every morning was a godsend for me because I woke up late from the radiant, bright sunlight, which penetrated into my room and tickled my face.
    • I got up jubilantly because I knew that I was going to hastily run to my parent’s bedroom and on my way there I would encounter our shaggy dog who would keep me company, jumping and envisioning coming morning walk.
    • When I met parents after a long night sleep, my dad took my hand and we would get ready for our morning stroll.
  • Those first minutes on the fresh air were always incredible.
  • They filled me with power and health and excited me.
    • Huge sequoias were sturdy, they looked like a mighty wall, which took care of our peace every night, gave us a scene of safety.
    • While my dad and I were walking down the sequoia alley, he could put his hand on my head and gently finger my wavy baby hair.
  • In that moment, I felt so small in comparison with him.
  • I felt the whole love in the Universe and I knew for sure that my dad would always protect me like those huge sequoias.
    • We usually walk for an hour, watching our exuberant dog running in the distance with dancing long and funny ears, and mighty sequoias accompanied us.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

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  • cümle 1
    • When I feel weary after long study day, which is often full of tedious activities, which imply continuous fight tooth and nail for grades and justice, I want to alienate from the city life and take a deep breath around nature.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • When I feel weary after long study day, which is often full of tedious activities, which imply a continuous fight tooth and nail fight for grades and justice, I wanted to alienate myself from the city life and take a deep breath around nature.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
    • As far as I can remember myself, I’ve always been a villager trough and trough even though I live in a megalopolis my whole conscious life.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • As far as I can remember myselfcall, I’ve always been a villager through and through even though I have lived in a megalopolis my whole conscious life.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
  • cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • When I seek rest and relief, I close my eyes and daydream about my early childhood years, which I spend with my family in the countryside next to the sequoia forest.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • When I seek rest and relief, I close my eyes and daydream about my early childhood years, which I have spendt with my family in the countryside next to the sequoia forest.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • Every morning was a godsend for me because I woke up late from the radiant, bright sunlight, which penetrated into my room and tickled my face.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Every morning was a godsendblessing for me because I woke up late from the radiant, bright sunlight, which penetrated into my room and tickled my face.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • I got up jubilantly because I knew that I was going to hastily run to my parent’s bedroom and on my way there I would encounter our shaggy dog who would keep me company, jumping and envisioning coming morning walk.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I got up jubilantly because I knew that I was going to hastily run to my parent’s bedroom and on my way there I would encounter our shaggy dog who would keep me company, jumping and envisioning the coming morning walk.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
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    • We usually walk for an hour, watching our exuberant dog running in the distance with dancing long and funny ears, and mighty sequoias accompanied us.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • We were usually walking for an hour, watching our exuberant dog running in the distance with dancing long and funny ears, and mighty sequoias accompanied us. ¶
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 14YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14