Pataisymai

Text from 55elena_jv - English

  • Such an Expensive Winter

  • You know winter is not just cold, but is expensive too.
  • You need to warm yourself and heat your home.
    • My new country house is heating in the best European medieval traditions - by a big stone made fireplace.
    • Actually a fireplace isn’t very effective for room heating, by the way it’s voracious for firewoods.
    • But a living flame looks beautiful, it envelops you with warmth and comfort.
  • In winter I’ve been spending a lot of evenings by its fire.
    • Also I have a warm floor on my balcony, where is my small ”winter garden” and an electric heater on the second floor.
    • They are my best spenders of electrical energy.
    • Which temperature do you have in your home?
    • It’s doesn’t comfortable for me when it’s hot and too dry , which is usual for flats in winter time in my country.
    • My home is cool, the temperature here is about 18-20 C degrees , on the balcony, where I usually work is 15 C.
  • For me it’s ok.
    • In addition, I have good helpers - sweater, socķs and tea.
    • In wintertime I drink especially lots of tea.
  • I suppose that the other half of my bill for electricity comes from constantly boiling a kettle.
    • I like hot tea, if it cooled down a little I will reheat it.
    • In summer I like to brew fresh leaves, especially leaves of black currant.
    • So again winter brings more expenses .
    • Further more, days are short and usually dark, so me and my plants are burning a lot of artificial light.
    • No matter how you look at it, winter costs us too expensive, whereas in summer is possible to live almost without costs.

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