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    • Colors of Autumn

  • We are on the wave of golden autumn now.
    • This year it accompany by the bright sun and blue sky which be given us by anticyclone following one after another.
    • My favourite activity in this beautiful period is cycling by the bicycle path which are surrounded with all the colors of autumn.
    • Sitting under a big yellow maple tree I’m wondering why some trees like more yellow and red outfit, while the other prefer to shed leaves green?
    • I noticed that especially bright flare up maples - they are the most saturated colors, mostly deep yellow.
    • Also birches, rowan and oaks give us bright shades, the first one are usually yellow, rowan is red and oaks are often fulvous and reddish.
    • At the same time an alder is covering my garden with its still green leaves.
    • First of all, leaves change its color as a reaction to decreasing daylight hours and colder temperatures.
    • For the production of chlorophyll, which is responsible for the green color of the leaves, trees need lots of light and warm.
    • When autumn brings short and cool days, the productions of chlorophyll is slows down and the existing one is decomposing.
    • As a result the other pigments begin to prevail and determine the color of leaves.
    • If the leaf cells contain a large amount of yellow pigments - carotenoids, then they give yellow or orange coloring.
    • If carotenoids content is low and days are sunny and nights are cool (not cold), then leaves are coloring in red due to accumulation in leaf cells red pigments - anthocyanins.
    • Besides some trees color is fixed as a taxonomic feature.
    • What about an alder, it continues photosynthesis longer then other thanks to a cohabitation with special bacteria which retain nitrogen.
    • So alder no need to save stock up on nutrients , so its vegetation period is longer...
    • So found the answer I hasten to continue my way through the autumn path.

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    • This year it accompany by the bright sun and blue sky which be given us by anticyclone following one after another.
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    • This year its accompanyied by the bright sun and blue sky which be gare driven to us by anticyclones following one after another.
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    • My favourite activity in this beautiful period is cycling by the bicycle path which are surrounded with all the colors of autumn.
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    • My favourite activity in this beautiful period is cycling byalong the bicycle path which are surrounded with all the colors of autumn.
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    • Sitting under a big yellow maple tree I’m wondering why some trees like more yellow and red outfit, while the other prefer to shed leaves green?
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    • Sitting under a big yellow maple tree I’m wondering why some trees like to wear a more yellow and red outfit, while the others prefer to shed their leaves green?
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    • I noticed that especially bright flare up maples - they are the most saturated colors, mostly deep yellow.
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    • I noticed that maples especially brightly flare up maples - they are of the most saturated colors, mostly deep yellow.
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    • Also birches, rowan and oaks give us bright shades, the first one are usually yellow, rowan is red and oaks are often fulvous and reddish.
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    • Also birches, rowan and oaks give us bright shades, the first one are usually yellow, rowan isbeing red and oaks are often fulvous andor reddish.
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    • First of all, leaves change its color as a reaction to decreasing daylight hours and colder temperatures.
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    • First of all, leaves change itstheir color as a reaction to decreasing daylight hours and colder temperatures.
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    • For the production of chlorophyll, which is responsible for the green color of the leaves, trees need lots of light and warm.
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    • For the production of chlorophyll, which is responsible for the green color of the leaves, trees need lots of light and warmth.
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    • When autumn brings short and cool days, the productions of chlorophyll is slows down and the existing one is decomposing.
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    • When autumn brings with it short and cool days, the productions of chlorophyll is slows down and the existing one isleaves begin decomposing.
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    • If the leaf cells contain a large amount of yellow pigments - carotenoids, then they give yellow or orange coloring.
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    • If the leaf cells contain a large amount of yellow pigments - carotenoids, - then they givebring about a yellow or orange coloring to the leaves.
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    • If carotenoids content is low and days are sunny and nights are cool (not cold), then leaves are coloring in red due to accumulation in leaf cells red pigments - anthocyanins.
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    • If the carotenoids content is low and, the days are sunny and nights are cool (not cold), then leaves are coloring inturning red due to the accumulation in leaf cells of red pigments - anthocyanins.
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    • What about an alder, it continues photosynthesis longer then other thanks to a cohabitation with special bacteria which retain nitrogen.
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    • What about an alder, i? It continues photosynthesis longer thean other tree species thanks to a cohabitation with special bacteria which retain nitrogen.
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