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Văn bản từ MistraldeMoulin - English

  • Psychotherapy

  • I am sitting nervously rocking on wooden chair wondering if I will have a bruise on my butt.
    • Finally he appeared like a star in the dark sky like last hope to resolve my dead ends.
  • My psychotherapist.
  • It was first time I came to decision to use this way of handling life messages to me.
    • He looked at me like a guru though inside of my head flashed a thought that he was drinking the whole last A night and most likely will dose off instead of listening to my boring complaints.
  • ”Where is it comfortable for you to start?”, he asked.
  • ”I will start where it has begun...
    • I thought I will marry a successful pilot but so far he has succeeded to be a loser.Gosh, how reality has shuttered those rose glasses while punching my snub nose.
  • No, I was not a bad wife at the start of our family life.
    • I accepted to eat on a cardboard box instead of table sitting on an old pillow with two big spots of diesel then he got in jail...
    • Ah, it is very long story I would need two lifetime to tell it all.
    • The problem is my husband has a savior complex, he put his nose in everyone’s matter except his own.
    • Instead of studying his CPL exams his runs around sniffing out what idiot could marry his sister hairy doughnut”.
    • ”Egh, that was a very disgusting phrase about my sister, keep your mouth shut about my relatives!’’ ’’Of course, you don’t like the truth nor your relatives also you are a lazy dynasty except your father God bless him.
    • Why am I even here with a such fake therapist who had read only a half of psychology book’’.
    • I stand up and leave the doomed place of course slamming the door with all my might.
    • I’d better hire a lawyer maybe he will help me to resolve my dead ends by a radical divorce therapy.

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  • Tiêu đề
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    • He looked at me like a guru though inside of my head flashed a thought that he was drinking the whole last A night and most likely will dose off instead of listening to my boring complaints.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He looked at me like a guru though inside of my head flashed a thought that he was drinking the whole of last A night and, most likely, willould dose off instead of listening to my boring complaints.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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  • câu 8
    • I thought I will marry a successful pilot but so far he has succeeded to be a loser.Gosh, how reality has shuttered those rose glasses while punching my snub nose.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I thought I will marry a successful pilot but so far he has succeeded to be a loser. Gosh, how reality has shuttered those rose glasses while punching my snub nose.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
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    • I accepted to eat on a cardboard box instead of table sitting on an old pillow with two big spots of diesel then he got in jail...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I accepted to eating on a cardboard box instead of a table, sitting on an old pillow with two big spots of diesel t.... Then he got inwent to jail...
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
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  • câu 13
    • Instead of studying his CPL exams his runs around sniffing out what idiot could marry his sister hairy doughnut”.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Instead of studying for his CPL exams his runs around sniffing out what idiot could marry his sister's hairy doughnut”.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • ”Egh, that was a very disgusting phrase about my sister, keep your mouth shut about my relatives!’’ ’’Of course, you don’t like the truth nor your relatives also you are a lazy dynasty except your father God bless him.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ”Egh, that was a very disgusting phrase about my sister, keep your mouth shut about my relatives!’’ ’’Of course, you don’t like the truth nor your relatives a. Also, you are a lazy dynasty except your father God bless him.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
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