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  • Extract of my Letter of Explanation (LOE) for my study permit.

  • For this reason, I would like to pursue professional development by studying Business Administration - Finance, a program offered by Centennial College.
  • This is a study program that will help me to develop new management skills and make wise financial decisions when I enter the workplace.
  • I have chosen to study at Centennial College because there is sure to be a program for anyone, and it was not difficult for me to select one.
  • Also, I love that it is an inclusive community college for all students due to the most diverse student population in the country.
  • It is well-deserved that it is ranked #1 in GTA, as I read on their website.
  • Centennial College’s location is another reason why I chose this study center, as the Progress Campus where business school is located in the city center will allow me to acquire real-world experience since cities are hubs for industries and I will be able to gain firsthand day-to-day experience during my stay in the country.

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    • For this reason, I would like to pursue professional development by studying Business Administration - Finance, a program offered by Centennial College.
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    • This is a study program that will help me to develop new management skills and make wise financial decisions when I enter the workplace.
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    • I have chosen to study at Centennial College because there is sure to be a program for anyone, and it was not difficult for me to select one.
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    • Also, I love that it is an inclusive community college for all students due to the most diverse student population in the country.
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    • Centennial College’s location is another reason why I chose this study center, as the Progress Campus where business school is located in the city center will allow me to acquire real-world experience since cities are hubs for industries and I will be able to gain firsthand day-to-day experience during my stay in the country.
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