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Văn bản từ Invir - English

  • Alexandra A science fiction story. Part III

    • The robots quickly put the cabin in proper condition, connected the life support systems, the air regeneration circuit, activated the water supply and disinfected the sleep capsule.
    • I showed the intern around and left, leaving her to settle in to her new place.
    • However, within fifteen minutes, she was on the bridge in the same uniform, only she had swapped her shoes for lightweight clogs without backs and stuck a band-aid on her heel.
    • The girl’s shoes were against regs–direct safety violations.
  • I had to tell her off for breaking the rules.
    • Alexa pursed her lips, blushed, nodded, asked for permission to leave, and quickly returned in those brand-new shoes.
  • The XO blamed me, saying, like, what kind of a person are you, Nikolai, that from the very first minutes of the newbie’s stay on the ship, you are foaming at the mouth.
    • Alexa seemed to take it okay.
    • Soon the control room gave us condition two and everything moved: preparation for launch, then condition one, start, acceleration, hyperjump… In other words, the hustle and bustle of your daily work life – everything without deviations from the procedure.
  • Alexa looked at it and learned, soaking in the information.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • The robots quickly put the cabin in proper condition, connected the life support systems, the air regeneration circuit, activated the water supply and disinfected the sleep capsule.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The robots quickly putset about putting the cabin in properto a working condition, connecteding the life support systems, the air regeneration circuit, activateding the water supply and disinfecteding the sleep capsule.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • However, within fifteen minutes, she was on the bridge in the same uniform, only she had swapped her shoes for lightweight clogs without backs and stuck a band-aid on her heel.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, within fifteen minutes, she was already on the bridge in the same uniform, only she hadhaving swapped her shoes for lightweight clogs without backs and stuck a band-aid stuck on her heel.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Alexa pursed her lips, blushed, nodded, asked for permission to leave, and quickly returned in those brand-new shoes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Alexa pursed her lips, blushed, nodded, asked for permission to leave, and quickly returned wearing those brand-new shoes.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • The XO blamed me, saying, like, what kind of a person are you, Nikolai, that from the very first minutes of the newbie’s stay on the ship, you are foaming at the mouth.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Soon the control room gave us condition two and everything moved: preparation for launch, then condition one, start, acceleration, hyperjump… In other words, the hustle and bustle of your daily work life – everything without deviations from the procedure.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Soon the control room gave usalerted us to condition two and everything moved: preparation for launch, then condition one, start, acceleration, hyperjump… In other words, the hustle and bustle of your daily work life - everything without deviations from the procedure.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10