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    • We have been wandering the whole day and now,tired, we are enjoying beauty of these places.

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    • We have been wandering the whole day and now,tired, we are enjoying beauty of these places.
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    • (1) We have been wandering the whole day and now,all day. Now, already tired, we are simply enjoying the beauty of these places. ¶(2) Though tired from wandering all day, we still enjoy the beauty of these places.
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