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Good Time
- We have been wandering the whole day and now,tired, we are enjoying beauty of these places.

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- We have been wandering the whole day and now,tired, we are enjoying beauty of these places.
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- (1) We have been wandering ~~the whole day and now,~~all day. Now, already tired, we are simply enjoying the beauty of these places. ¶(2) Though tired from wandering all day, we still enjoy the beauty of these places.
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