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  • We Have Crossed the Line

  • All the same, summer is over, contrary to all hopes.
  • Today is the first day of autumn.
    • It’s difficult to believe it.
    • Although at least the half of September here is still climatic summer.
    • And what is more, the first part of September usually warmer and more comfortable than June - by its nights and some days temperature, warm ground and the sea, which hasn’t yet cooled down.
    • But anyway the 1st of September is some kind of border, having crossed which you understood that there is no way back to summer.
    • No other way to this magic time, which is never enough, as just through long, gloomy winter.
  • Actually I love autumn, especially its ”gold” part.
    • I still able to swim, to catch warm sun rays, to spent lots of time outside, but all it with light sadness, with understand of transience of summer, pleasant time and life in general.
    • I wish you haven’t lost any of warm autumn rays, be happy and all the best.

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    • And what is more, the first part of September usually warmer and more comfortable than June - by its nights and some days temperature, warm ground and the sea, which hasn’t yet cooled down.
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    • And what is more, the first part of September is usually warmer and more comfortable than June - byecause of its nights and some days temperatures on some days, warm ground and the sea, which hasn’t yet cooled down.
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    • And what i's more, the first part of September is usually warmer and more comfortable than June - by its nights and some days temperature, warm ground and the sea, which hasn’t yethe day and night temperatures haven't cooled down yet.
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    • But anyway the 1st of September is some kind of border, having crossed which you understood that there is no way back to summer.
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    • But anyway the 1st of September is some kind of border, having crossed by which you understooand that there is no way back to summer.
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    • But anyway the 1st of September is some kind of border, having crossed which youa border, which it is understood that once crossed there is no waygoing back to summer.
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    • I still able to swim, to catch warm sun rays, to spent lots of time outside, but all it with light sadness, with understand of transience of summer, pleasant time and life in general.
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    • I'm still able to swim, to catch the sun's warm sun rays, to spent lots of time outside, b. But all itof this is with light sadness, with the understanding of the transience of summer, its pleasant time and life in general.
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    • I can still able to swim, toswim, I can still catch the warm sun rays, to spent lots ofrays of the sun, and I can spend time outside, but all it with lightwith sadness, withan understand ofing of the transience of summer, pleasant time and life in generaland a remembrance of pleasant times.
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