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  • We Have Crossed the Line

  • All the same, summer is over, contrary to all hopes.
  • Today is the first day of autumn.
    • It’s difficult to believe it.
    • Although at least the half of September here is still climatic summer.
    • And what is more, the first part of September usually warmer and more comfortable than June - by its nights and some days temperature, warm ground and the sea, which hasn’t yet cooled down.
    • But anyway the 1st of September is some kind of border, having crossed which you understood that there is no way back to summer.
    • No other way to this magic time, which is never enough, as just through long, gloomy winter.
  • Actually I love autumn, especially its ”gold” part.
    • I still able to swim, to catch warm sun rays, to spent lots of time outside, but all it with light sadness, with understand of transience of summer, pleasant time and life in general.
    • I wish you haven’t lost any of warm autumn rays, be happy and all the best.

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