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Κείμενο από Cristinajuca - English

  • The island

    • The island is in the middle of the ocean, I only can see water.
    • The island is small with a big montain in the middle, there is lot of vegetation and animals.
    • Also, the weather is ok, it’s sunny but not very hot.
    • I am wearing a T-shirt and shorts but I don`t have shoes.
    • First of all, I look for other people in the beach and in the water I want to know how to climb the mountain and see where I am and look for some place where I can sleep.
    • The forest is leafy, so it’s difficult to get through it.
    • In the middle of the forest I see a house, it seems to be derelict, so I get inside.
    • In the house I find tins with food and an old radio, maybe I can contact with somebody using the radio.
    • Near the house I find a lake with clear water an lots of fishes I decide to take a bath to relax and later I will find the way to return to my home

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English