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  • Villa Dolores zoo

  • Villa Dolores Zoo The aim of this report is to talk about the actual situation of the zoo and determinate if the conditions of it are the best The reality we face in order to prepare this report I spoke with etologist and specialist in several animals to understand which is the real situation of the zoo. few years ago the zoo was full of families who went there to spend the weekend and now we found an empty place with few zookeepers to care for the animals.
  • According to Gabriela Ibar experienced ethologist this animals used to receive thousand of views per day and now that number dropped to zero.
  • This situation is matter of concern because it’s a fact that the isolation in animals have a strong consequence in their Mental Health even the behavior will change causing depression and later death.
  • A cruel true For everything described previously is in sight that the zoo is not prepared to take care of all those animal due to each animal there have a special needs and it necessary to provide them a space similar to the natural habitat.
  • conclusion I think it’s time to put before us the animal welfare and get the animals out of there and take them to sanctuaries where they can live with their kind

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    • Villa Dolores Zoo The aim of this report is to talk about the actual situation of the zoo and determinate if the conditions of it are the best The reality we face in order to prepare this report I spoke with etologist and specialist in several animals to understand which is the real situation of the zoo. few years ago the zoo was full of families who went there to spend the weekend and now we found an empty place with few zookeepers to care for the animals.
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    • This situation is matter of concern because it’s a fact that the isolation in animals have a strong consequence in their Mental Health even the behavior will change causing depression and later death.
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    • A cruel true For everything described previously is in sight that the zoo is not prepared to take care of all those animal due to each animal there have a special needs and it necessary to provide them a space similar to the natural habitat.
      Stem nou!
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    • conclusion I think it’s time to put before us the animal welfare and get the animals out of there and take them to sanctuaries where they can live with their kind
      Stem nou!
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