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  • FCE article_Music in education

  • «If you want to have well balanced body, brain and personality you should be able to do three things: speak foreign language, do sport and play music instrument.» (Fifty Shades of Grey) Despite the fact that the main hero in this book isn’t really well balanced I think the idea is brilliant.
    • Every person should have at least basic knowledge of music.
    • First of all, the more you play music instrument, the more you develop your fine motor skills which brings in brain development.
    • It’s said that people, who play music instrument, rare suffer from Parkinson disease and they are more preserved from brain deterioration.
    • Secondly, music is a good accelerator of socialization.
    • For example, playing guitar will definitely helps you to become a soul of any teenage company.
  • The process of learning an instrument isn’t a sprint, but marathon.
    • The earlier you start invest time and money, the more organically it will be.
  • Remember that music is for all ages.
  • Take your time and go for it.

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