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  • Defender of the Fatherland Day

    • On the 23td of February in Russia celebrated Defender of the Fatherland Day.
    • It was timed to the formation of the Red army in 1918.
    • Also the holiday at that time called the day of a red gift, because it was customary to donate presents to soldiers of Red Army.
    • Then the name and scope of a holiday changed several times, until it became a day off and something akin Men’s Day in general, although its name still connected with defenders of the Fatherland, who in my opinion are military.
    • Anyway, attention and presents in this day often get all men.
    • Though socks and shaving accessories, which receive most men, is difficult to called presents.
    • To be fair, I’ll add that International Women Day, which follows in two weeks, I also dislike.
    • Women’s rights doesn’t infringe upon anymore, everyone is equal, no need to fight and defend it, at least in European part of the world.
    • I’d like that both of these holiday finally lost its need, that always was peace and equality, instead of contrived holidays. 

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    • Also the holiday at that time called the day of a red gift, because it was customary to donate presents to soldiers of Red Army.
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    • Also the holiday at that time called the dIn those days the holiday was known as Day of a rRed gGift, because as it was the customary to donate presents to soldiers of Red Armybestow gifts to Red Army personnel.
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    • Then the name and scope of a holiday changed several times, until it became a day off and something akin Men’s Day in general, although its name still connected with defenders of the Fatherland, who in my opinion are military.
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    • Then the name and scope of athis holiday changed several times, until it became a day off and something akin to Men’s Day in general, although its name is still connected with defenders of the Fatherland, who, in my opinion, are military.
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    • ThenSubsequently, the name and scope of athis holiday has changed several times, until it became a day off and something akin to Men’s Day in general, although its name stillremains connected with defenders of the Fatherland, who in my opinion are military personnel.
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    • Women’s rights doesn’t infringe upon anymore, everyone is equal, no need to fight and defend it, at least in European part of the world.
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    • Women’s rights doesn’are not infringed upon anymore, everyone is equal, noat least in European part of the world, everyone is equal. There is no longer any need to fight for and defend it, at least in European part of the worldthese rights in Europe.
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    • I’d like that both of these holiday finally lost its need, that always was peace and equality, instead of contrived holidays. 
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    • I’d like that there is no need for both of these holiday finally loss. It its need, that always wasbetter to have peace and equality, instead of contrived holidays. 
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    • I’d like that both of these holiday finally lost its need, that always waso see both holidays eliminated and that there would be genuine peace and equality, instead of contrived holidays. 
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