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Text from Ivan099 - English

    • Why I learn English

    • Last year I finished a high school in which I was learning coding, now I must find a job but can’t do that without speaking very good english that is because I am on this page and I need all your help to perfect my english.
    • Can someone correct this text and show me my errors.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English