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  • London is not easy

    • Today I had a 3-hour class, and I went to Holborn station after class.
    • On my way to the station, I saw a fruit booth.
    • An old gentleman was taking care of this booth.
    • London has been very cold recently, I couldn’t bear it if I am out for over an hour, how could he endure the cold the whole day?
  • I tried my best to buy more.
  • I picked up a box of raspberries, a box of grapes, a cucumber, and a half pound of cherries.
  • ”I will give you a birthday discount!” he said.
  • At that moment, there is a saying in my heart”you don’t have to give me a discount’’.
  • But I did not say that since I was worried refusing his discount would hurt him.
    • ”6 pounds darling” That’s almost only half the price if I bought these stuff at the supermarket.
    • Knowing from his appearance and accent I think this gentleman is local.
  • London is not easy for aliens like me, and I am surprised to know it is also not easy for local people.
    • wherever I am, I always get touched by those who work hard and show good resilience.
    • Life is not easy, and so is London.
  • But people can be strong.
    • I hope summer would come soon, so the weather can be better and wouldn’t be that brutal cold at night.

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