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    • Benefits of taking care of an animal as a child

    • Some parents fear leaving their children alone with their pets but many of them ignore how beneficial it would be had their offspring the opportunity to look after an animal.
    • But what is the most beneficial aspect?
    • Is it because it pushes them to get out and get some fresh air?
    • Or perhaps is it because it teaches them precious values and principles?
    • A child needs from two to three hours of exercise per day.
    • Unfortunately, though, exercise can be monotonous.
    • Nowadays, most children find more amusing playing computer games than engaging in real life activities.
    • Therefore, taking their dog for a walk can be the perfect excuse to get them to move their body too.
    • Pets can be very important to some and for most of the families they are indeed part of the family.
    • Entrusting easy tasks to the little ones like taking the dog out for a walk or feeding them and brushing their fur can be regarded as insignificant but it really is not.
    • Taking care of a living creature teaches kids important values like love, respect and responsibility.
    • The above in mind, which can be posited to be the greatest benefit?
    • Although education is a very important aspect to take into consideration we cannot neglect the many benefits of being physically healthy especially for kids.
    • “Mens sana in corpore sano” or so it is said.
    • Exercising, and I must remind you that walking also counts, entails a raise in our endorphin levels that will help us perform better in any aspect of our lives.
    • In conclusion, I would assert that children need to be out into the real world and taking care of their beloved pets is the perfect way to keep them up and active which in the long run will result in them being sharper as they would have known what it is like to have a living being under their care.

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    • Some parents fear leaving their children alone with their pets but many of them ignore how beneficial it would be had their offspring the opportunity to look after an animal.
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    • Some parents fear leaving their children alone with their pets but many of mothers and fathemrs ignore how beneficial it would have been had their offspring had the opportunity to look after an animal.
    • Some parents fear leaving their children alone with their pets but many of them ignore how beneficial it would be had, ignoring the benefits to their offspring in having the opportunity to look aftecare for an animal.
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    • Entrusting easy tasks to the little ones like taking the dog out for a walk or feeding them and brushing their fur can be regarded as insignificant but it really is not.
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    • Entrusting easy tasks to the little ones like taking the dog out for a walk or feeding ithem and brushing theirits fur can be regarded as insignificant but it really is not.
    • Entrusting such easy tasks to the little ones like taking the dog out for a walk or feeding them and brushing their fur can be regarded aschildren as walking, feeding, or brushing (grooming) a dog might seem insignificant, but it really isthey are not.
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    • Although education is a very important aspect to take into consideration we cannot neglect the many benefits of being physically healthy especially for kids.
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    • Although education is a very important aspect to take into consideration we cannot neglect the many benefits of being physically healthy - especially for kids.
    • AlthoughWhile for children education is a very important aspect to take into consideration, we cannot neglectignore the many benefits of being physically healthy especially for kidsgood health.
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    • Exercising, and I must remind you that walking also counts, entails a raise in our endorphin levels that will help us perform better in any aspect of our lives.
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    • Exercising,e -- and I must remind you that walking also counts, entails a raise in ourqualifies as such -- increases endorphin levels that will help us perform better in many aspects of our lives.
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    • In conclusion, I would assert that children need to be out into the real world and taking care of their beloved pets is the perfect way to keep them up and active which in the long run will result in them being sharper as they would have known what it is like to have a living being under their care.
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    • In conclusion, I would assert that children need to be out into the real world and t. Taking care of their beloved pets is the perfect way to keep them up and active which, in the long run, will result in them being sharper as they would have known what it is like to have a living being under their care. ¶
    • In conclusion, I would assertthink that children need to be out intoengage with the real world, and taking care of their belovedone good way to assure this happens is to have them care for a pet or pets. It is the perfect way to keep them up and active which, and in the long run will result in them being sharper as they would have known what it is like to have a living being under their care. ¶
      make them more astute about caring for others and for themselves.
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