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  • A great day

    • In the last summer i went to the beach in unforgettable experience.
    • The beach was very gorgeous awe-inspiring.
    • The soft sand was really hot and you can’t put your naked feet on it and you can notice different beautiful shells here and there .
    • Far above, The yellow sun looks just like shining gold .to the North, There was the deep sea merging with the endless sky making a breath-taking sight .
    • The sea was so clear that I could see colorful fish swimming between my feet which feels great .
    • Along the long beach ,There were a very comfortable seat ,and between each two seats there was a small table with ripe and tasty fruits and fresh jus on it .As I was walking I could feel the fresh smell of the beach and the light breeze coming against me .
    • At sunset , the view of the sea and the sun was really arresting and exquisite.the place become so calm and you can not think except of peaceful and relaxing thought and escape to all my problems and stress .

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    • The soft sand was really hot and you can’t put your naked feet on it and you can notice different beautiful shells here and there .
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    • The soft sand was reallyso hot andthat you caouldn’t put your naked feet on it and you can. You could notice different beautiful shells here and there .
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    • The soft sand was reallyso hot andthat you can’t put your naked feet on it and you can notice differentouldn't walk barefoot on it. There was a variety of beautiful shells here and there on the beach.
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    • Far above, The yellow sun looks just like shining gold .to the North, There was the deep sea merging with the endless sky making a breath-taking sight .
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    • Far above, Tthe yellow sun looks just like shining gold .t. To the North, Tthere was the deep sea merging with the endless sky, making a breath-taking sight .
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    • FarHigh above, Tthe yellow sun looks justblazed like shining gold .t. To the Nnorth, There was the deep sea merginged with the endless sky, making for a breath-taking sight .
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    • Along the long beach ,There were a very comfortable seat ,and between each two seats there was a small table with ripe and tasty fruits and fresh jus on it .As I was walking I could feel the fresh smell of the beach and the light breeze coming against me .
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    • Along the long beach ,T, there were a very comfortable seat ,and b. Between each two seats there was a small table with ripe and tasty fruits and fresh jusice on it . As I was walking I could feelsense the fresh smell of the beach and the light breeze coming against me .
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    • Along the long beach ,There were a very comfortablComfortable seating was arranged along the sbeat ,ch, and between eachvery two seats there was a small table withupon which lay an array of ripe and tasty fruits and fresh jus on it .As I wasice. As I walkinged I could feesmell the refresh smelling aroma of the beach and thefelt a light breeze coming against me .
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    • At sunset , the view of the sea and the sun was really arresting and exquisite.the place become so calm and you can not think except of peaceful and relaxing thought and escape to all my problems and stress .
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    • At sunset , , the view of the sea and the sun was really arresting and exquisite.t The place becoame so calm and you can not think. I could not think of anything except of peaceful and relaxing thought s and of escape tofrom all my problems and stress .
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    • At sunset , , the view of the sea and the sun was really arresting and exquisite.t The place had become so calm and you canould not think except of help but have peaceful and relaxing thought s, and escape to allfrom my problems and stress .
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