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MicHaelA38'den mesaj - English

  • Recommendation

  • To Whom It May Concern: It is with very great pleasure that I write this recommendation for Karolina to support her application for admission to your university.
    • I have known Karolina for 10 years as a classmate, neighbour and one of my closest friends and I am truly glad I had the opportunity to get to know such a unique person, who I believe with many of her qualities demonstrates great potential for the future.
  • Since I have known her, Karolina has always been a great student and classmate.
  • She is hard-working and committed to her education.
    • She is always willing to learn and obtain new information, and her determination to achieve the best results possible in school just as in her personal life is not only motivation for her, but sometimes for me as well.
  • Karolina is a thorough student who does not behave superficially towards education, especially in areas she is interested in.
  • She is always keen on comprehending information from these areas more deeply and is able to apply it well.
    • I find Karolina to be an intelligent, conscientious and responsible student whose qualities make her one of the top in the class.
    • But, not only is she an outstanding student but also a really supportive and helpful classmate who always cheers you up, when it is needed, and never refuses to help with any problem.
  • As a friend, Karolina is wonderful.
    • Our friendship began in primary school when I came as a new pupil to her class and she was the one who helped me to become integrated into the collective.
    • She is a considerate, helpful and caring individual who would not turn her back on a person.
    • Moreover, she displays a cheerful and amiable personality thanks to which people tend to make contact with her gladly.
  • I would also recommend Karolina as a trustworthy person who can be relied upon when life gets difficult, and she will definitely prove to be a valued friend to those fortunate to spend time with her.
    • Beyond mentioned, I consider it important to point out Karolina’s ability of time management, which enables her to use her time wisely for self-fulfillment by means of extra activities.
  • In addition to school, last year she took part in a correspondence seminar in medicine (KaSMED), which gave her the opportunity to improve her skills in this field.
    • She placed in the top spot and it was because of the great value the participation had for her that she decided to participate again this year.
  • She also benefited from the opportunity for non-formal education, personal and social development, and communication in foreign languages provided by her participation in the European Solidarity Corps’ One World project.
  • Karolina incessantly develops her artistic side.
  • She is a creative individual for whom art represents value.
    • She likes drawing, and taking photographs, but above all she enjoys music.
    • She has been playing the piano for 12 years and besides many successes achieved in the music school she attends, the piano means much more to her.
  • I can recommend Karolina with no hesitation.
    • I believe that with her qualities Karolina is a deserving applicant who will surely prove to be a valuable asset to your university. Sincerely,

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

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    • To Whom It May Concern: It is with very great pleasure that I write this recommendation for Karolina to support her application for admission to your university.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
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    • I have known Karolina for 10 years as a classmate, neighbour and one of my closest friends and I am truly glad I had the opportunity to get to know such a unique person, who I believe with many of her qualities demonstrates great potential for the future.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I have known Karolina for 10 years as a classmate, neighbour, and one of my closest friends, and I am truly glad I had the opportunity to get to know such a unique person, who I believe, with many of her qualities, demonstrates great potential for the future.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
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    • She is always willing to learn and obtain new information, and her determination to achieve the best results possible in school just as in her personal life is not only motivation for her, but sometimes for me as well.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • She is always willing to learn and obtain new information, and her determination to achieve the best results possible in school justas well as in her personal life is not only motivation for her, but sometimes for me as well.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
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    • But, not only is she an outstanding student but also a really supportive and helpful classmate who always cheers you up, when it is needed, and never refuses to help with any problem.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • But, not only is she an outstanding student but, she is also a really supportive and helpful classmate who always cheers you up, when it is needed, and never refuses to help with any problem.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
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    • Our friendship began in primary school when I came as a new pupil to her class and she was the one who helped me to become integrated into the collective.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Our friendship began in primary school when I came as a new pupil to her class, and she was the one who helped me to become integrated into the collective.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 11YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11
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    • I would also recommend Karolina as a trustworthy person who can be relied upon when life gets difficult, and she will definitely prove to be a valued friend to those fortunate to spend time with her.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 14YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14
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    • Beyond mentioned, I consider it important to point out Karolina’s ability of time management, which enables her to use her time wisely for self-fulfillment by means of extra activities.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Beyond being mentioned, I consider it important to point out Karolina’s ability of time managementto manage her time, which enables her to use her time wisely for self-fulfillment by means of extra activities.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 15YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 15
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    • In addition to school, last year she took part in a correspondence seminar in medicine (KaSMED), which gave her the opportunity to improve her skills in this field.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 16YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 16
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    • She placed in the top spot and it was because of the great value the participation had for her that she decided to participate again this year.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • She placed in the top spot, and it was because of the great value the participation had for her that she decided to participate again this year.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 17YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 17
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    • She also benefited from the opportunity for non-formal education, personal and social development, and communication in foreign languages provided by her participation in the European Solidarity Corps’ One World project.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 18YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 18
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    • She has been playing the piano for 12 years and besides many successes achieved in the music school she attends, the piano means much more to her.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • She has been playing the piano for 12 years, and besides the many successes achieved in the music school she attends, the piano means much more to her.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 22YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 22
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    • I believe that with her qualities Karolina is a deserving applicant who will surely prove to be a valuable asset to your university. Sincerely,
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I believe that with her qualities, Karolina is a deserving applicant who will surely prove to be a valuable asset to your university. Sincerely,
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 24YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 24