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    • Dear recruiter, Please accept this letter and the attached resume as an indication of my sincere interest in the open assistant team leader position with Walmart.
    • Having spent over 1 year working with inventory and dealing with customers in the retail industry, I have not only developed robust problem-solving skills, but also excellent customer service abilities combined with my current business administration diploma, where I’ve had the chance to hone my communication abilities by completing marketing and customer service-focused courses.
    • I worked in the retail industry at Save on foods for one year and two months, where I had the opportunity to interact with customers by answering questions, responding to special requests, and describing product features.
    • Additionally, I had the chance to learn about warehouse and inventory management by completing data entry tasks such as updating on-hand quantity inventory in the system, assigning barcodes, cycle counting, and receiving shipments.

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    • Dear recruiter, Please accept this letter and the attached resume as an indication of my sincere interest in the open assistant team leader position with Walmart.
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    • Dear recruiter,¶

      Please accept this letter and the attached resume a      s an indication of my sincere interest in the open¶
      assistant team leader position      pplication for the position of assistant team with Walmart.
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    • Dear recruiter,¶

      Please accept this letter and the attached resume       as an indication ofregarding my sincere interest in the open¶
      assistant team leader position with Walmart.
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    • Dear recruiter,¶

      Please accept this letter and the attached resume as an indication of my sincere interest in the open¶
      assistant team leader position with Walmart.
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    • Having spent over 1 year working with inventory and dealing with customers in the retail industry, I have not only developed robust problem-solving skills, but also excellent customer service abilities combined with my current business administration diploma, where I’ve had the chance to hone my communication abilities by completing marketing and customer service-focused courses.
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    • Having spent over 1 yearI have more than a year of experience working with inventory and dealing with customer services in the retail industry, I have not only. During this time I have drawn on my business administration training in developeding robust problem-solving skills, but also and excellent customer service abilities combined with my current business administration diploma, where I’ve had the chance to hone my communication abilities by completing marketing and customer service-focused courses.nd communication skills.
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    • Having spent over 1 year working with inventory and dealing with customers in the retail industry, I have not only developed robust problem-solving skills, but also excellent customer service abilities combined with my current business administration diploma, where I’ve had the chance to hone my communication abilities by completing marketing and customer service-focused courses.
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    • I worked in the retail industry at Save on foods for one year and two months, where I had the opportunity to interact with customers by answering questions, responding to special requests, and describing product features.
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    • I worked in the retail industry at a Save o-On foods outlet for one year and two months, wherduring which time I had the opportunity to interact with customers by answering questions, responding to special requests, and describing product features.
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    • I worked in the retail industry at Save on fFoods for one year and two months, where I had the opportunity to interact with customers by answering questions, responding to special requests, and describing product features.
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    • Additionally, I had the chance to learn about warehouse and inventory management by completing data entry tasks such as updating on-hand quantity inventory in the system, assigning barcodes, cycle counting, and receiving shipments.
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    • Additionally, I had the chance to learned about warehouse and inventory management by completing data entrythrough such tasks such as updating on-hand quantitythe store's inventory in thecontrol system, assigning barcodes, cycle counting, and receiving shipmentassisting in the store's inventory logisitics. ¶
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