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Text from SJ42 - English

  • Essay about modern lifestyles

    • Modern lifestyle can endanger our life in the sense that the application of some good practices like respect of sleeping hours, regular physical exercise or healthy food tend to be neglected.
    • This essay focus on two major problems directly related to modern lifestyle: the lack of sportive activities and the bad alimentation.
    • Many adults do not practise sport regularly and spend most of their working time sit on a chair.
    • However, I think a part of them regard physical activities as important for their health but have other priorities which prevent them to liberate time at this effect.
  • We live in a society in which many people must juggle between their work and a family life.
    • In this context, the modern lifestyle lets usually little time to do sport.
  • The problem is that the lack of practice makes physical exercise more difficult and often less appreciable.
    • For example, running can have a relaxing effect, but a person who is not used to it, is less susceptible to enjoy doing it, because the activity requires more effort on his part.
    • In these conditions, it can be also more discouraging for someone to liberate free time for something that he does not like doing.
    • Then, bad alimentary habits, which are often reproduced from a generation to the next, are another problem.
    • Consummation of meat is often too much important, which increases the risk of cardiovascular diseases.
    • In the same way, sugar takes an important place in our society despites health problems which can resulted of an excessive consummation.
    • In addition, some people do not often take the time to cook and are used to buy their meals in fast foods.
    • In conclusion, unhealth alimentation and lack of physical activities are not the only problems of modern lifestyle, but they count among the mains in the sense that they can influence a lot physical and psychological wellbeing.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Modern lifestyle can endanger our life in the sense that the application of some good practices like respect of sleeping hours, regular physical exercise or healthy food tend to be neglected.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Modern lifestyles can endanger our life in the sense that the application of some good practices like respect ofor sleeping hours, regular physical exercise or healthy food tend to be neglected.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
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    • This essay focus on two major problems directly related to modern lifestyle: the lack of sportive activities and the bad alimentation.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This essay focuses on two major problems directly related to modern lifestyles: the lack of sportiveng activities and the bad alimentationpoor diet.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
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    • However, I think a part of them regard physical activities as important for their health but have other priorities which prevent them to liberate time at this effect.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • However, I think a part of themsome people regard physical activities as important for their health but have other priorities which prevent them to liberate time at this effectfrom having free time for doing these.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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    • For example, running can have a relaxing effect, but a person who is not used to it, is less susceptible to enjoy doing it, because the activity requires more effort on his part.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • For example, running can have a relaxing effect, but a person who is not used to it, is less susceptiable to enjoy doing it, because thesuch an activity requires more effort on hithat person's part.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
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    • In these conditions, it can be also more discouraging for someone to liberate free time for something that he does not like doing.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In these conditionircumstances, it can be also more discouraging for someone to liberatefind free time for something that he does not like doing.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • In the same way, sugar takes an important place in our society despites health problems which can resulted of an excessive consummation.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In the same waSimilarly, sugar takes an important place in our society despites health problems which can resulted of an from excessive consummaption.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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    • In conclusion, unhealth alimentation and lack of physical activities are not the only problems of modern lifestyle, but they count among the mains in the sense that they can influence a lot physical and psychological wellbeing.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In conclusion, unhealth alimenty eationg and the lack of physical activities are not the only problems of modern lifestyle, but they count among the main ones in the sense that they can substantially influence a lot physical and psychological well being. ¶
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14