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- Yalda’s night
- Hi, this time I’d like write about Iranian Yalda’s night.
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- In Yalda’s night people go grand parents home and eat nuts , watermelon , pomegranate etc. And sit round of special table and read poems of Hafez and talk together.
- Tv has special program for it and for some hours people enjoy together.
- If you surf on the net you can see many pictures of it .

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- In Yalda’s night people go grand parents home and eat nuts , watermelon , pomegranate etc. And sit round of special table and read poems of Hafez and talk together.
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- In Yalda’s night people go to their grand parents' home and eat nuts , watermelon , pomegranate etc. And sit round ofa special table and read poems of Hafez and talk together.
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- IOn Yalda’s nNight people go to their grand parents' homes and eat nuts , watermelon , pomegranate, etc. ~~And sit~~, while sitting round ofa special table ~~and read poems of Hafez and talk together~~, reading Hafez poetry and and having conversation.
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- Tv has special program for it and for some hours people enjoy together.
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- T~~v has special program for it and for some hours~~here is always a special on television that runs for hours and which people enjoy watching together.
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- If you surf on the net you can see many pictures of it .
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