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Text from 9Daria - English

    • mail for an exam

    • Hi, I have written mail for my english lesson.
  • I would like to someone check it.
    • Dear Veronica, I have just won a dance competition.
  • I’m very surprised and I don’t believe it.
  • My friends were proud of me.
  • I would like to invite you to my show.
    • It will be on Monday 23.12.2022r. at 7p.m. in the theatre.
  • Please let me know if you can come, because I have to buy a ticket for you.
    • I’m waiting for your reply XYZ

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English