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  • Illegal Immigration

    • Illegal immigration is a dangerous issue that has various disadvantages to the illegal immigrants.
    • To start with with, Illegal immigration is a main reason for a lot of of mental and social disorders.
    • leaving their home and families might be a very difficult tough thing to deal with for illegal immigrants , especially when They are alone in a new country where they don’t know anything or anyone.
    • In the otherhand being in a country with a totally new traditions and culture causes to many immigrants the so-called cultural shock.
    • Secondly, immigration requires huge sums of money and to get to the other side.
    • Apart from the fact that many immigrants are exposed to monument and Stealing from the groups who are responsible for their deportation.
    • Finally, because of unequipped boats and the sinking, many immigrants lose their lives in this dangerous trips.
    • Even if they arrive safely to the new country, lot of them may be arrested, imprisoned, or Deported.
    • To sum up, Illegal immigration is a serious risk driving a lot of dangerous drawbacks to immigrants.

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    • leaving their home and families might be a very difficult tough thing to deal with for illegal immigrants , especially when They are alone in a new country where they don’t know anything or anyone.
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    • lLeaving their home and families might be a very difficult tough thing to deal with for illegal immigrants , especially when Tthey are alone in a new country where they don’ not know anything or anyone.
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    • In the otherhand being in a country with a totally new traditions and culture causes to many immigrants the so-called cultural shock.
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    • IOn the other hand, being in a country with a totally new traditions and culture causes toin many immigrants the so-called cultural shock.
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    • Apart from the fact that many immigrants are exposed to monument and Stealing from the groups who are responsible for their deportation.
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    • Apart from the fact that manyMany such immigrants are exposed to monument(????) and Sstealing from the groups who are responsible for their detransportation.
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    • Finally, because of unequipped boats and the sinking, many immigrants lose their lives in this dangerous trips.
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    • Finally, because of unequipped boats and the sinking, which often sink, many immigrants lose their lives ion thisese dangerous trips.
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