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  • Global poverty

    • Global Poverty is one of the serious problems in our world that has a lot of reasons.
    • Firstly, the lack of education is one of the principal reasons of Global poverty because it is considered as the main door to obtain jobs howadays and livelihood nowadays.
    • UNESCO has indicates that 171 million people could be lifted out of extreme poverty, if they master the basic reading skills.
    • Secondly , another reason of this problem is the shortage of salaries.
    • Although unemployment and poverty are closely corrolated problems, the World Band denied that unemployment is rthe main cause of poverty.
    • Thirdly, Conflict is one of the most commen forms of risk driving global poverty today as it leads to destroy infrastructure which deprives people from doing their Jobs.
    • This in turn leads them to flee to other countries without taking any thing with them.
    • Over 80% of Syrian population lives below the poverty line now.
    • To sum up, Global poverty is a cause of variaty of reason.

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    • Firstly, the lack of education is one of the principal reasons of Global poverty because it is considered as the main door to obtain jobs howadays and livelihood nowadays.
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    • Firstly, the lack of education is one of the principal reasoncauses of Gglobal poverty, because iteducation is considered as the main doorway to obtain jobs howadaysing a job and livelihood nowadays.
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    • UNESCO has indicates that 171 million people could be lifted out of extreme poverty, if they master the basic reading skills.
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    • UNESCO has indicates that 171 million people could be lifted out of extreme poverty, if they master the basic reading skills.
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    • Although unemployment and poverty are closely corrolated problems, the World Band denied that unemployment is rthe main cause of poverty.
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    • Although unemployment and poverty are closely corroelated problems, the World Band denied that unemployment is rthe main cause of poverty.
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    • Thirdly, Conflict is one of the most commen forms of risk driving global poverty today as it leads to destroy infrastructure which deprives people from doing their Jobs.
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    • Thirdly, Conflict is one of the most commeon forms of risk driving global poverty today, as it leads to the destroyuction of infrastructure, which deprievents people from doing their Jobs.
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