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    • Yesterday I went to town I bought a expensive shoes for my little cousin however when he put them on they weren’t his sizes he grew into it, I was angry with myself and my cousin held me back , he said don’t worry, and I broke him down why I was so angry, where that rage comes from. so a week later I bought him a shoes with the correct size to cheer him up , nevertheless he told me that I had to do away with buying things for him that he is happier just hagging out with me and going out to play soccer,he got the massege across he wanted me to understand

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    • Yesterday I went to town I bought a expensive shoes for my little cousin however when he put them on they weren’t his sizes he grew into it, I was angry with myself and my cousin held me back , he said don’t worry, and I broke him down why I was so angry, where that rage comes from. so a week later I bought him a shoes with the correct size to cheer him up , nevertheless he told me that I had to do away with buying things for him that he is happier just hagging out with me and going out to play soccer,he got the massege across he wanted me to understand
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    • Yesterday I went to town. I bought a expensive shoes for my little cousin h. However, when he put them on they weren’'t his sizes he grew into it,. I was angry with myself and my cousin held me back , h. He said , "don’'t worry", and I broke him downthen explained to him why I was so angry, and where that rage coames from. so aA week later, I bought him a shoes with the correct size shoes to cheer him up , n. Nevertheless, he told me that I had to do away with buying things for him, that he is happier just hagnging out with me and going out to play soccer,h. He got the maesseage across he wanted me to understand.
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    • Yesterday I went to town Iand bought a expensive shoes for my little cousin h. However, when he put them on, they weren’t his sizes he grew into it,. I was angry with myself and but my cousin hetold me back , he said don’tnot to worry, and I broke him downbout it. I told him why I was so angry, and where that rage comes from. so aA week later I bought him a shoes within the correct size to cheer him up , nevertheless h. He told me that I had to do away withstop buying things for him, that he iwas happier just hagnging out with me and going out to play soccer,he got the masse. Thus did he effectively get across he wanted me to understandto me the message he'd intended.
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