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  • My journey on English

  • I started learning English at 6.
  • But, at that time, I never enjoy learning it as it is a compulsory subject instead of an enjoyable hobby.
  • I went to Sydney university a few years ago, I rarely talked to English native speakers except in class.
  • I called it “culture gap” or folk-based difference, but I know the truth is, most of Sydney people were more than helpful to English learners like me, but I still chose not to.
  • I only got a few Australian friends on Facebook, but more than 200 new Chinese friends on WeChat.
  • I know it is fun to chat in my mother tongue and be familiar with each other’s topics.
  • As a result, however, I was one hundred miles from being confidant to chat in English which is a shame to an oversea student like me.
  • If I only speak Chinese, why don’t I stay in China?
  • After that, I saw a video on the Internet, it’s about a teenager polyglot lives in New York, he spoke more than twenty languages in his 16th which amazed me.
  • From then, I decided I want to be a polyglot as well.I learnt a little Spanish and Japanese on Duolingo, and improved my English a little.
  • Still, my English is not good enough, so I am here to hear advice from native speakers, to correct my grammar and enlarge my vocabulary.
  • I am truly grateful to my helpers in Sydney, I wish I can also help people learn Chinese.
  • Let’s keep chatting, keep improving, keep this society breed more polyglots.
  • Thank you for your attention, comments, please:)

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