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    • Hello,my name is Aidana and i’m from Kazakhstan,Aktau.Actually i am learning english,and i want to speak fluently on english.So,thats my story about my ex best friend.I am a student of a Tourism college,in firs coure i was living in my grandmother’s house,that was hard-to live in someone’s else home.I felt bad and uncomfortable.But after 5-6 months my grandmother had moved on to the other city,and i had to go the dormitory.And that was best solution.Because there are your own space and no one can to bother you.And i met the girl,her name was Dilnaz.Omg she was so pretty,beautiful eyes and perfect body,soft voice,she seemed to me pretty and nice girl,also she was kind and positive.And by that way i made friends with her.And after a week,she had thought that we are best friends for some reason but i had guessed that we actually not.And i come to terms with it.After one month she had been acting up,that was very strange,like she was jealous to me,it seemed to me strange.And after two months she confessed her love for me.That was unexpectedly for me.And after all,i told her that our situation is not possible at all.Its no chance for relationships.And she was upset,but it was the only way that i could choose .And that was interesting story in my boring life:)

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    • Hello,my name is Aidana and i’m from Kazakhstan,Aktau.Actually i am learning english,and i want to speak fluently on english.So,thats my story about my ex best friend.I am a student of a Tourism college,in firs coure i was living in my grandmother’s house,that was hard-to live in someone’s else home.I felt bad and uncomfortable.But after 5-6 months my grandmother had moved on to the other city,and i had to go the dormitory.And that was best solution.Because there are your own space and no one can to bother you.And i met the girl,her name was Dilnaz.Omg she was so pretty,beautiful eyes and perfect body,soft voice,she seemed to me pretty and nice girl,also she was kind and positive.And by that way i made friends with her.And after a week,she had thought that we are best friends for some reason but i had guessed that we actually not.And i come to terms with it.After one month she had been acting up,that was very strange,like she was jealous to me,it seemed to me strange.And after two months she confessed her love for me.That was unexpectedly for me.And after all,i told her that our situation is not possible at all.Its no chance for relationships.And she was upset,but it was the only way that i could choose .And that was interesting story in my boring life:)
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    • Hello, my name is Aidana, and iI’m from Kazakhstan, Aktau. Actually i, I am learning eEnglish, and iI want to speak it fluently on eEnglish. So, that’s my story about my ex -best friend. I am a student ofat a Ttourism college,in. In my first coure ise, I was living in my grandmother’s house,t. That was hard- to live in someone’s else’s home. I felt bad and uncomfortable. But after 5-–6 months, my grandmother had moved on to the another city, and iI had to go to the dormitory. And that was the best solution. Because there aryou have your own space and, no one can to bother you. And iI met the girl,; her name was Dilnaz. Omg, she was so pretty, with beautiful eyes and a perfect body, and a soft voice,s. She seemed to me like a pretty and nice girl,also and she was also kind and positive. And by that way i, I made friends with her. And after a week, she had thought that we awere best friends for some reason, but iI had guessed that we were actually not. And iI coame to terms with it. After one month, she had been acting up,that which was very strange, like she was jealous tof me,i. It seemed strange to me strange. And after two months, she confessed her love for me. That was unexpectedly for me. And after all,i I told her that our situation iwas not possible at all.It There’s no chance for relationships. And she was upset, but it was the only way that iI could choose . And that was an interesting story in my boring life:).
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    • Hello, my name is Aidana and iI’m from Kazakhstan, Aktau. Actually i, I am learning eEnglish, and iI want to speak fluently on eEnglish. So, that's my story about my ex -best friend. I am a student ofat a Tourism college, in the first course iI was living in my grandmother’s house, that was hard- to live in someone’s else home. I felt bad and uncomfortable. But after 5-6 months my grandmother had moved on to the other city, and iI had to go to the dormitory. And that was the best solution. Because there areis your own space and no one can to bother you. And iI met the girl, her name was Dilnaz. Omg, she was so pretty, with beautiful eyes and a perfect body,soft voice, she seemed to me a pretty and nice girl, also she was kind and positive. And byin that way i, I made friends with her. And after a week, she had thought that we are best friends for some reason but iI had guessed that we actually not. And iI come to terms with it. After one month she had been acting up,that which was very strange, like she was jealous tof me, it seemed to me strange. And after two months she confessed her love for me. That was unexpectedly for me. And after all,i I told her that our situation is not possible at all. It's no chance for relationships. And she was upset, but it was the only way that iI could choose . And that was an interesting story in my boring life:)
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